Free writing.

My brother Macima is six he likes playing games and  eating candy. But there’s one thing he really likes to do. He likes to play rugby. He plays for Mt Albert Lions.  They train every Wednesday's and have a game on every Saturday. He scores a few tries on some of the games. After every game they play the coach announces the player of the day they get a trophy, lollies and a toy car. Last Saturday my brother got the player of the day for hard working and great team support. I was so proud of him he got to keep the lollies and the toy car but the trophy had to be returned back when they come to the next training. So far my  brother has scored 5 tries all up. He says he will score more and tackle lots of people on his next upcoming game.

This is my free writing about my brother Macima hope you enjoy.

    

                                 Week six writing.

                                         Lost pet.

The sun gazed through my window as I  hopped out of bed to get ready. As I was getting dressed I realised someone really important to me was outside waiting for me to come out.  So I stumbled down the stairs so excited making my way to the back door. I open the door with my eyes clothes then took a little peek hoping my pet would be there but she wasn’t there. As I stood  there so confused thinking how could she just disappear into thin air. I decide to look for her. A  few minutes later  of searching all around the neighbourhood. I come back home with a broken heart and tearful eyes. I just couldn’t imagine life without my pet she meant the world to me she was my best friend. I run upstairs to my room and lock the doors and bursted into more and  more tears nonstop. But right then a thought came to my mind. Since I don’t know where my pet is maybe others will know where my pet is. So I sat on my desk drawing lots and lots of posters that said lost pet at the bottom of my writing I drawed a picture of my pet giraffe. I sellotaped the posters to every tree and every pole I even knocked on people’s doors but there was no sign of my pet. Just the thought of never seeing my pet again was devastating. I felt upset and worried what if someone stole her  what if someone called the zoo keepers to come and take my special pet giraffe. This  was not the kind of  day I  enjoy all I needed now  was some peace and quiet  so I walked over to the park remembering the times when we use to play hide and seek. I climbed on top of the  park and scanned through the area but my giraffe was no where to be seen. As I  stared at the ground I felt someone so tall chewing on there food behind my back. I turned around and saw my pet giraffe standing right there I was so happy there was no words to describe the way I felt.

 Yesterday my class watched a video about a girl who lost her pet giraffe. We talked about how she felt and the way she looked my class room came up with great ideas and great describing words.We then wrote our own story about how we lost our pet giraffe then found it.

The digestive system

2 weeks ago for writing my class watched a video about how the digestive system works. After that we wrote about what we learnt about the digestive system. It was pretty hard but I still tried my best. Hopefully you learn something from my piece of work.