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Thursday 25 June 2015

100 words or less.


This is my story with only 100 words or less. I wrote about never land because that was the first idea that came to my mind. Hope use like it.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous29 June 2015 at 10:48

    I like how you said the beach water is very clean and shiny and that the sun and moon is very small. Could you improve or take out some word and add more detail's?

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  2. samlyons27 August 2015 at 22:12

    Hey Leiola. The way you have described this island makes it sound like a beautiful place to live.well done

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